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SHORT POEM:

It was a long night party,
Pinkie left not a single Smartie.
Kiba seemed distressed and tired,
This I always admired.
For I had to take her home,
Through the thickest of the brome.
"Come with me", I said,
As we watched the orange sun shed.
Walking along the path,
Togetherness we hath.
Her head leant against mine,
Like a flower and a vine.
The twilight began,
Such as in Japan.
With beauty slumbering,
As the beginning of spring.
Up to the door I had taken her,
It happened so fast that it became a blur.
More time I needed,
Oh yes, then my night would be completed.
Yet at this time I must say "Bye,"
To a woman under the dark night sky.
As an angel would say "Bye" back,
That voice gave my heart a wack!
Floating on clouds I felt it was,
Such as a dreamer does.
Back to reality I had to be,
Next to the torn out, beaten tree.
I lost my mind at that time,
All I could hear was a single chime.
Ringing and ringing until I saw,
The sight of awe.
Kiba's face, so beautiful and fine,
A kiss on the head would give the sign.
Her blushing and giggling told me one thing clear,
That she would always and forever be my dear.

~TristanTreg

Always with me! :iconkibadoglover45:
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~Dino-Mario Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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*TristanTreg Apr 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
xP
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~TheGamer67 Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's some good shading...say what do you use? To shade that is.
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*TristanTreg Jan 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
A pencil. :3
HB 2 that is.
However, I still don't think that it's the right pencil for me... :/
I must keep searching! x3
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~TheGamer67 Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a wooden pencil isn't it? If it is then that may be better than using these mechanical ones, they're better for the lines.
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*TristanTreg Jan 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
It's a wooden pencil.
I don't really fancy the mechanical ones, however I do use it whence sketching the lines.
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~TheGamer67 Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's exactly what I do.
I do need to work on my shading, I used a wooden pencil to shade this one picture I finished just now and I must say it does look better than the mechanical.
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:iconsnufkingirl:
Dawww! So cute!!! Love this!!! :iconiloveitplz:
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*TristanTreg Jul 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you! :D
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:iconsnufkingirl:
No problem! ^^
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